मन माझे माकड !!

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मन माझे
माकड
भित्र्यांसमोर शूर
शुरांसमोर भेकड

मन माझे माकड
नाही टिकत एका जागी
असलो जरी हावरा
दाखवतो स्वतःला वैरागी

टोपी चढवतो जरीची
आणि हातात घेतो काठी
आहे मी मस्त कलंदर
फक्त हे दाखवण्यासाठी

सजवले स्वतःला कितीही
घेतले जरी राजकुमाराचे सोंग
सत्याच्या आरशासमोर
करता येईना ढोंग

भासवतो जसा बाहेरून
तसा आतून मी नाही
याचे शल्य काही केल्या
मनातून जात नाही

जगा बरोबर करितो
स्वतःची ही फसवणूक
सुख नाही मनाला
फक्त वरवरची हसवणूक

— दीप
०२/०२/२०१०

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4 Responses to “मन माझे माकड !!”

  1. EKNATH Says:

    I liked it very much. Knowing one’s own reality is the beginning of true spirituality. Now, don’t let your mind fool you. As you said, you will never be at peace by deceiving yourself. It needs a lot of courage and constant efforts to live a truthful life. Keep it up.

    BTW, the font is quite small. And as usual 🙂 there are several grammatical and spelling errors.

  2. Sourabh Says:

    Hey hi, mast kavita aahet mitra. chan lihilyat.
    mala pan kavita khup aavadtat,….mi pan kahi kelya aahet.
    Just in case want to tear my poetry.
    dis is the link
    http://sourabhparanjape.blogspot.com/

    keep it up.

  3. Sourabh Says:

    Hi Deepak,
    sorry it’s not tear my Poetry, read it as ‘hear (read) my poetry’.

    Tuzi Me Ekta hi kavita vachli, m also wrote a poem on ektepana long befor. ti & tuzi kavita vachun suchleli nuktich keleli ektepana varchi kacita yethe det aahe (links)
    me Ekta hi kavita chaanch aahe, mast aahe.

    http://sourabhparanjape.blogspot.com/2010/03/blog-post_17.html
    (hi me aadhi keleli)

    http://sourabhparanjape.blogspot.com/2010/08/blog-post_18.html
    (hi tuzi vachun suchli,……i hope u dn’t mind,……take it as a Compliment.
    Chal bye,….nice to meet somebody how share same love & passion.
    Keep writting 🙂 😀

  4. Pallavi Says:

    Aayushyatalya itakya chotya chotya barakavyan var tumha lokana kasha kavita suchatat mala aproop vatate. Tumachya sarakhya lokanchya kavita vachalya ki mag vatat arre aapal hi kahis asach aahe. 🙂

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